New Jenny Grant Covers

I confess, I have not yet written a word (except that 1,000 words from chapter one of Trouble in Tacoma). But I tweaked and redid the covers. Does that count? LOL I tried to make the cover “cleaner,” i.e. with less borders and extras. I minimized the logo to kind of match the Circle C log (circular) and instead of “Andrea Carter and the . . .” I put Jenny’s name front and center.

Actually, if anyone can think of better titles to go with these cover images (I can’t change the images, as I lost the program to create “Jenny,” “Gideon,” and “Micah,” so I have to go with the pictures). But they can be shuffled around (somewhat) and the titles can be changed. Here are the tentative dates (settings) and a short tentative summary. I welcome any other ideas! I really think I’ll give this series a shot this summer, when I’m back in WA and not dealing goats, horses, chickens, ducks, and math. Anyway here we go . . .

P.S. Most of these summaries were created by my mentor, Colleen Reece, just a month or two before she passed away. I am grateful for whatever she came up with, although by themselves, the summaries are not enough to carry the story. A few fans came up with some ideas, which I have condensed and added here.

Feel free to help brainstorm in the comments!

June 1879: Introduces family, logging and mill operations. Last day of school. June, and all it does is rain. The rain ends up with the Puyallup River overrunning its banks, trapping Jenny and her brothers, as well as their “nemesis” Marshall Dickson. To complicate matters, a log jam closes the river, threatening all of the settlements inland from the riverbank. The logjam must be broken up, but unknown to the lumberjacks, a group of kids are nearby . . . and so on. A fan, Valerie K, came up with some good plot ideas. I like this one a lot: After the explosion Jenny and Micah get swept away and cling to a floating tree, while Gideon and Marshall are stranded on a log island. She added a lot of back story that I didn’t have room to put here.

Mount Rainier Rescue? The Grant family could take an overnight trip to Mount Rainier to celebrate Jenny’s bday. A few sunny days makes it all worthwhile, but hiking near the mountain has its dangers–the glaciers are melting fast, which cuts off the family’s return home . . . and so on.

July 1879: Something strange is going on at the old, abandoned Point Defiance military area. It’s a favorite place for Jenny and her brothers to ride and explore. But dead animals are being used as a warning to “stay away!” When the kids discover huge, ape-like footprints on the muddy trails, things really start to heat up. Is this creature the sasquits that Jenny’s Salish (Indian) friend insists it is? What do you do when Jenny’s older brothers and even her parents brush it off as “legend nonsense.” A fan, Lily L., suggested Jenny and Gideon get lost in the woods. This is a good idea, as it would lead them to places they ought not to stick their noses into. An abandoned campfire/site would make them quite suspicious.

Or give me a title that goes with this cover and a one-sentence summary. It needs to be set in the woods, but not necessarily in Point Defiance. The forests are everywhere, so the kids don’t have to go far to find the woods. But Point Defiance butts right up to the water (a huge bluff overlooks the Sound), so I thought it might be a good setting. Other titles and summaries?

August 1879: Reading history, I discovered that a fire tore through the center of Vashon Island in the late 1800s. Jenny & brothers are caught too close and need to make their escape off the island (where they were expressly forbidden to go, due to the fact that their little skiff (a homemade sailboat built by Micah) is not that watertight or sound. They are only supposed to sail near the shoreline, but of course, Micah and Jenny want to try their luck with sailing, and after all, Vashon Island is not very far from Tacoma . . . especially if they set sail from Pount Defiance (it’s a 20-minute ferry ride today).

The kids make it to the island and end up in the middle of a frantic evacuation–the smoke from the forest fire can be seen from the mainland. They get in the skiff and try to sail back to Commencement Bay, but the current and a sudden storm takes them through the Narrows and far to the south. (I’ve been in a boat when the motor gave out, and we had to be rescued by the Coast Guard. That current is strong!) How do they get home?

January 1880: After a horrendous storm, Jenny and sidekick Micah discover a weatherbeaten chest on the beach half buried in the sand. Inside is  valuable–??? Silver tea set? Jeweled necklace? A card with a name and a long-ago date? Due to the business being shut down for an unusually long fire season, family needs the money it will bring. But the right thing to do is to find out if there are rightful heirs to the plunder. Or they could even find a washed-up person–ragged clothing? A lady? Maybe she’s lost her memory and the kids help her find her family?

Maybe it’s pirate plunder? Smugglers? Let me hear your thoughts!

June 1880: My friend Colleen just jotted down a bunch of ideas for this. Anyone care to expand?

A lazy or careless logger is fired. He vows revenge. Starts sabotage. Puts equipment out of commission or better, starts a fire that sets the forest aflame and endangers lives. (wild men and wild animals disrupting camp) Loggerโ€™s Rodeo?

Horses pulling the logging wagons. Eli is managing, but the load shifts and the logs start falling. Horses startle, traces and reins snap. Horses break free. Load injures someone? Has it been sabotaged? And if so, by whom? And why?

A flume to the river? Riding the flume?

August-September 1880, From Colleen: The last thing Jenny Grants wants is to be shipped off to a private girlsโ€™ school in San Francisco. It is worse than she expects. Snobby girls look down on her for being a loggerโ€™s daughter in a place many of them believe is so wild and backwoodsy that folks are in danger of being scalped by Indians. She finally makes  a good friendโ€”only to have her move away. Just when Jenny is at her lowest ebb, Andi Carter arrives (and clearly that is at the end of the book).

From Emma (fan): Jenny gets in trouble for playing hooky from school to watch her father’s lumberjacks fell the biggest tree this side of Pugetย Sound. It gets even worse when Jenny is almost crushed by the tree. At the same time, her parents receiveย a letter from a close friend (Mrs. M thinks Grandmama could visit just as this is happening, and as a result of her shock at such behavior, could recommend the school for youngย ladies in SF). Jenny is shipped to the school soon afterward. Jennyย travels by steamship to San Francisco. She befriends the captainย of the ship and soon learns to pilotย the ship. They reach their destination and she is picked up by the worst possible person- Rebecca Carter. Then on the first day at school, Jenny is in trouble for climbing a tree and being late for supper. Jenny feels very alone and wishes to be home. Just when she can bear it no longer, a dark-haired girl her age movesย to the school and is her roomate. The girl’s name? Miss Andrea Rose Carter.ย 

Published by Susan K. Marlow

I'm the author of the Circle C and Goldtown Adventures series. I blog as "Andi Carter," the main character in the Circle C series. She lives on a huge cattle ranch in 1880s California. These are her adventures.

17 thoughts on “New Jenny Grant Covers

  1. Love these!

    For book #2 I tried to think of a few new titlesโ€ฆ this is all I could think of.

    Echoes Of The Unknown, The Secrets Behind The Brush, The Unknown of Point Defiance

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  2. I tried to think of a couple titles for book #3 โ€“ โ€œSailing Into Dangerโ€ โ€œSailing Into The Flamesโ€ 

    Book #5 โ€“ Tried to add/expandโ€ฆ.โ€œJenny always tries to think the best about people, but (name) has had it in for himself from day one. When Eli is managing a transfer of lumber, the load shifts and the logs start falling. Causing the horses to startle, and traces and reins to snap. The horses get loose and start going insane around the site. This accident has left several injuriesโ€ฆ but, the question is, was it an accident? Or is Jennyโ€™s family being sabotaged?โ€

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  3. I have an idea for what you could do inside the chest! You could make it be some belonging to a girl/boy and they have run away from home or been kidnaped. Later the find a boy/girl having been washed up by the tide. They take him in and clothe and feed him. He tell Jenny about his back round. They bring him back home, and it turns out his father is a millionaire and gives Jenny’s family a big reward!

    For other twists in the story, if he/she is kidnaped then the bad guy can come in and make things a little more difficult.

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  4. A lazy or careless logger is fired. He vows revenge.ย but he gets discovered in the process! and sent to jail after some startling but harmless crimes. Jenny’s family thinks everything is over but his brother comes back for revenge and kidnaps jenny! She is taken away! Will she ever see her family again? She is taken to Mexico and then somebody unexpected comes a long. Mitch Cater! This circles back to Mitch grabbing Andi in Trouble at the line shack. And talking about being in Mexico!

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  5. I absolutely love the covers! So many exciting possibilities! I was thinking maybe Jenny and Gideon could meet up with a black bear and that’s how they get lost in the woods. They could lose their way while trying to get away from the bear! Then maybe they run into a grumpy old trapper who scares them with legends of the sasquits!

    Ash H.

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  6. This is a fun idea!

    I am a little confused though. Do we give title suggestions for each chapter or for the book itself?

    And also, do we give plot summaries/outlines for each chapter or, again, for the book itself?

    I have posted scenes from my book on my blog, ForHisGloryAlone, and I need a book title as well.

    Could you possibly go and read my (short) summary on the story and give me ideas?

    I also asked any of my blog readers to do so, but I haven’t gotten anything yet.

    Here is the link if you are able to do this: Scene from WIP (Work-in-progress) #2 โ€“ ForHisGloryAlone

    My plot summary is near the end of the post.

    Thank you!

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    1. Oh my goodness, no. Just alternate title suggestions for the BOOKS. And plot summaries for the books, but hey, the more plot events I receive the easier it is to turn it all into one long story, right?
      Okay, I’ll head over and see what I can do, but let it be known . . . I’m not good at thinking up titles.

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