I thought you would like to know that I’m almost up to the place where I left everybody off on the cliffhanger. I have already expanded the original (and fixed all the wrong names). I have even thought of one new and fun scene to add . . . where after the bombing tragedy and Andi and Justin are hanging on to life by a thread, Chad and Mitch decide to pay Mr. Henderson and his thugs a little visit. I don’t think I’ve ever written a knock-down drag out fight between the Carter brothers and the bad guys. I might even have them end up in jail, and Justin is not even well enough to bail the boys out.
Oh, it’s fun to write in multiple points of view. Thanks for urging me to get this book finished. It’s so old, but I believe I have given it new life with some added scenes (like Andi up at her special spot and sees one Henderson’s “spies” stalking her. LOL)
Anyway, if anybody has any fun scenes that they think should be incorporated, let me know just a brief summary. You don’t have to tell me how to finish the book any longer. I will make that work somehow, but any scenes that might be something you would like to see acted out, I’m open (but I won’t make any promises you’ll see “your” scene suggested expanded and included in the story).
Cover and Contents here. I’m hoping for twenty chapters and I hope I can make it to 175 pages (Trouble at the Line Shack is 154.) The more intense/fun scenes (that must have something to do with the story in some way, of course), the longer this book will be, which I know you like. Oh, one more thing. I gave Philip Barnes (the dead lawyer friend of Justin’s) two little girls, Constance and Sarah, ages 9 and 7. I added them just in case there is something I can do with them and Andi. You just never know. This is called WHAT IF? brainstorming for Plot Events.